"…by zombies"

I was just told about this way to train yourself to get rid of passive constructions. Anytime you see a passive construction in your writing, just add "…by zombies" to the sentence.

Here are some examples:

Throughout the story “No Name Woman” there was always a feeling of despair being placed on the reader by zombies.

I had to finish my essay. My math homework also had to be completed by zombies.

When Anzaldúa was growing up, mixing Spanish and English was not allowed by zombies in her school.

Victor Frankenstein’s lack of responsibility is shown by zombies when he is working on his creation and neglects his health and family.

You get the idea. Try it for yourself!